writing

Today I wrote a story that had two pages in it. I am really proud of myself because I hardly ever write two paged stories. It's pretty cool that I'v achieved this.

My Narrative

My writing group has been writing narratives. Here are the first two paragraphs.

Captain Tory

One sunny evening there was a man called Captain Tory. He had a nephew Tom.  After Tom’s parents past away Captain Tory had to look after poor Tom.  Captain Tory was a sailor trying to find his lost ship, the Sea Scraper. It had disappeared after it had been tied to the wharf one night. Captain Tory had been looking for his ship for thirty years until his son Terry and daughter-in-law Taliya past away.

One day Captain Tory took Tom on a trip to Alaska because that’s where Captain Torys ship went missing. When they got there they went straight to the place Sea Scraper disappeared.